peer evaluation reflection

From Karim:
Well done good work when thinking about slogans and key words. Nice design and good ideas. Please show the final draft on the computer as an image so I can give you the clearest evaluation, but you seem to have good ideas. Put them into pictures and next time you may wish to show your ideas with more pictures. So far, I think you have clever ideas and a good background.I see what angle you are coming from and what your plans are, and good work, it seems like you thought out your task. I would advise (although I have already stated so) that you add pictures so that I can give you the most thorough evaluation.

My Reflection:
I think that i did a good job on thinking on what i am suppose to do for the flyer, i have added the slogan, a logo, a question to hook my reader, key information that needs to be available to the reader, the benefits of my product, other methods to persuade my reader and appealing advertisements I used.  I could of added more pictures and made it look better. 

My Flyer

reflection

Reflection for advertisement:

In IT class we have been learning about advertisement for the past few weeks. And so one of our tasks was to make awareness for any product of your choice and you may also make up your own, and decided to make up my own product so named it Pelo gorgeous which means in Spanish beautiful hair, so I decided to do that. First I had to plan it on this paper and (i will be putting the picture under this reflection) we had to give our product appealing adjectives and mine were: soft, natural, long, rich, fresh, and beautiful. Questions to hook your reader: what are you waiting? What are the benefits of this product: softer hair and longer hair, my slogans are magnificent hair begins here and no more tears. What is the key information? Coast, special offers, sizes and competitions. What are methods that I can use to persuade my reader I have written this: pictures, buy 1 get 1 free, trailer and discounts. And for what I’m actually going to do for the final is this:

I am first going to write the title which is pelo gorgeous and the introduction how it works, what is the name of the product. and then I am going to have the sales that are coming up what are the prices how can you win them are you going to have discounts or any special offers we have for them. After that I am going to put the ingredients, and definitely lots of pictures that will appeal to the human eye. Finally, at the end I am going to have a conclusion on why you should buy my product and I will basically summarize it, and this shampoo is for women only of all ages. Advertisements has been a fun topic to learn about, but it need a lot of effort and thinking outside the box on what your audience might like or what might they hate.        
  

pelo gorgeous advertisement

 Pelo gorgeous

I’m going to do and advertisement about the shampoo Pelo gorgeous and I’m doing this because I think that Pelo gorgeous is a good shampoo for your hair, but its popularity is not a lot so I’m doing it about Pelo gorgeous raise its popularity.

I asked my mum, sister and friend on who the advertisement should be for and they all said the women that are of all ages.

This advertisement is going to catch all women’s eyes mostly because they are the ones that are usually concerned about their hair and they are the ones who get hair damage.

Women are people who get really concerned about their appearances especially when it comes to their hair. Sometimes they might have tangles in their hair and the best way to get rid of it is by using this shampoo, this problem annoys the little girls more.

My strengths in using DTP is the layout on it and I know almost everything on there so it’s going to be easier for me to control it.

The highlight of this project is going to be the title, picture and slogan and it’s going to have be big because that’s how they are going to read the whole thing.

To finish the whole project it might take me about 10 days to perfect it. 

Slogan:

No more tears

Logo:

 

check list

Ward 7DD- Check list of tasks that need to be on the blog

types of advertisements

Ref: http://animalnewyork.com/2014/tony-tiger-manipulating-eyes/

Type-association, because it uses a cartoon character to promote the promote this product.

Uniqueness-The unique thing is that they have made the tiger look like he is eating the food item.

When

see this advertisement it makes me lick my fingers and want to buy this product.  

Ref: http://www.wowfashions.in/beauty/fair-and-lovely-advanced-multivitamin-daily-fairness-expert-review/

Type-Must have, because it makes you look good.

Uniqueness- The advertisement shows all the different stages that happen when you put the cream.

When I see the advertisement it makes me look for this product and at least try it.

Ref: : http://uthmag.com/dubai-launches-life-size-monopoly-game/

Type-games and activities, as they are making them play live monopoly.

Uniqueness – The idea of this is unique as they are promoting a game by playing it.

When I see this advertisement it makes me want to buy the game.

Ref: https://www.baekdal.com/insights/cpa-cpm-cpc-wtf

Type-Call to action makes the viewer donate.

Uniqueness-the idea of putting a panda mask on a fish is unique.

When I see the advertisement it makes me donate to this website.

Uniqueness-

Ref: http://wjb-cpa.typepad.com/wayne_j_belisle_cpa_busin/2010/01/

Type-Repetition, because it repeats the same word over and over.   

Uniqueness- the way they have arranged it makes the ad unique.

When I see this ad it makes me want to go inside this shop.

 

Ref: http://yourquestions.mcdonalds.ca/questions/5114

Type- Special Ingredient, because it shows a potato which is put in fries and is necessary. 

Uniqueness- this advertisement shows half potato which is actually how much

Potato they use in making fries and this makes it unique.

When I see this advertisement it makes me lick my fingers and make me want to buy it.

Hype

http://www.uaeadvertisements.com/nine-west-part-sale-25-percent-to-50-percent-off-742.html

When I see this advertisement it makes me want to go to that shop and buy their products because there is a sale so I save my money. The unique thing about this advertisement is that they have made the discounts bold and big.

Testimonials and  endorsements http://rollingout.com/2013/05/03/biggest-celebrity-endorsements-deals/5/

I you are a big fan of this celebrity you would probably want to buy this advertisement because it captures the fans and that is what it is trying to do

Fear http://becuo.com/advertisement-on-toothpaste

When I look at this advertisemnt it tells me that this type of advertisment is going to help you with your bad breath and what is unique about this is thst it is simple and not complicated for the readers eyes

  humor:

  http://www.amusingtime.com/funny/funny-advertisements/page/3/

when I read this it gives me a warning that McDonalds is unhealthy and that it is making             us gain weight.

                                                                                                                    claim:

://atlantic.ctvnews.ca/halifax-mall-pulls-back-to-school-shopping-ads-denounced-as-sexist-1.1422340

when I look at this advertisements captures my attention and the unique thing about it is that it tells me all about it without using a lot of words so the costumers will not get bored of it

sense appeal:

http://ceciliosanchez.com/creative-art-director/graphic-design-portfolios/

when I look at this advertisement it looks peaceful since it is in the beach and the drink is fresh which makes it healthier so people would want to drink it more than the other drinks   

Advertising

Advertisement 

What are advertisements:
Advertisement is grabbing someones attention to the thing it wants you to buy from them, and as you do that they will get more money to have more interesting things for you to buy. And this is an easier way for the company to get the people to buy more things from them and a fun way for the people to know about them. They could advertise you by a video (YouTube), radio, letter, sign, board or any device have but they have to know its that's going to catch your attention.

When does this happen:
The company starts using advertisements when that company wants to get more money and sometimes for the people to get to know that company event more for what kind of products they have for you , so they can have a picture or a video or anything to grab the costumers attention to that product or comapny (it depends on what the company wants) which makes you want to go and buy that product that the comapny has made for the people.

What are the Advantages of advertisements?

The good things about advertisements are is it introduces you to a new product. So that the company gets more money and also for the children or parents to get what they have been looking for.

They have greater sales because they are now known for what they have and more people are going to come and buy the things from the shop.

They have competitions with other companies

Better quality because from the money they get they get more equipment to build stuff out of.   

They could afford more employs to work for them. , all bosses in their stores love to have more employs, and to get more employs they need to get more money so their employs could be better than the rest because of how much money they got from the costumers.  

People could recognize the company/brand even more for all the good stuff they had made for us.

They have a higher acceptability of life.

Getting more costumers

Get feedback from the costumers on their products so they can improve on what they need to do to get even more costumers and get even more money.


What are the Disadvantages of advertising?

Kids are going to be attracted to the fake things that they put on the TV advertisements have a big influence in children sometimes advertisements sometime cause parents frustrations because of their kids. Since children can’t drive they can’t go and buy for themselves what they want so they have to go to their parents and try to convince them to go and buy the things they want for them that they saw on from the stuff on the advertisement. Some advertisements are not always for children.Some advertisements are not always for children. Online advertisements are also not good for you because some advertisements tell you about online shopping and that there are sales going on only online so when people start going online shopping they start to get lazy because now they don’t have to go up walking so they are now starting to become not healthy and that is a bad effect in our lives

 How do you make an advertisement that captures people’s eyes?

 Every one that will want to make an advertisement should know exactly what people are looking for, what they like especially children because they can convince their parents to buy them what they saw on TV like chocolate and all these unhealthy things that children like, that is why there is disadvantages in advertisements.And you will most likely to put your advertisement on TV because TV is where most people hear news or sales and of course advertisements. But you may also put these advertisements on the devices such as phones, iPods’, iPads’ , laptops and many more.

People would usually put advertisements with celebrities because that when people start to look at the advertisement and for a different topic there is a different celebrity.

 For example:

If it was about bran new shoes you would probably put an athlete.

For cloths you would put a model. And so on.

What are good advertisements?

A good advertisement has to be catchy and more interesting. It need to have pictures a slogan a big title and what is it for, like if it was  sale and it was 50% of then you would write that in a big format so it can catch the readers eyes.

What makes a bad advertisement?

A bad advertisement is when there is only writing no pictures, no colours so it doesn’t really catch the readers eyes and they will just ignore it and leave so the company will not get anything  

Reflection on advertisements:                                 

    

Introduction to Digital Design Class

About myself and why i like Digital Design :

My name is Ward i come from Yemen i am 11 years old my birthday is on March 12.  have been in this school since KG2. I like IT because you use the computer/laptop anywhere and it is fun to learn.

What have we covered so far in Digital Design Class and what i like about it: 

We had to learn why the folders for our lives so important
and how to keep it how's when can they use it and where they can use it.
We have also covered the laptop or computers main things like
 what is the button called and what is it used for how do you
use it every time and the shot form of it .
We also learnt what the school network is the username
and the password so we can use it when we need the laptop .
We have went over the criteria and what we need to do to get
a Seven or eight or what we need to do to get a six or a five
which I am not looking for a five.

Reflection on what we did in digital design class:                                     

Thursday 15 October 2015  

Advertisements

In today’s IT class we were searching the different types of advertisements, such as humorous ads, fear, endorsements and more of these advertisements, so basically we had to find pictures that relate to what we were researching on .We had to work with the person that were sitting next to us, so I was working with Akshansh, and we decided to split the work up, there were 8 types so I did 4 while he did the other 4.
We were discussing and on what images is suitable for that specific type of advertisement so we of course did  not do it all by ourselves. I found it hard finding the exact picture for some of the types like humorous because Akshansh and I did not find most of the pictures funny it is usually the videos that are funny because they have moments in them.      

Reflection on CD cover

Reflection:

It was a fun task and I really enjoyed it 

because it was simple and easy thing to do.

i have never actually made a CD before so

it was a fun and new thing for me to do. 

instructions:

step 1: go to publisher 

step 2: chose the label template 

step 3: go to media label the first one 

step 4: chose a picture to go on there.

step 5: print it and stick it on a a CD