Sunday, 21 February 2016
Saturday, 13 February 2016
tech fair
Me and Malak are working together to make a transporting car so we decided to make a transport car because it takes part in our life.
- we take a toy car that moves by the remote
- remove the top part and make sure it still works
- get a small bowl on top of the car
- put objects on it and move the car
Saturday, 12 December 2015
peer evaluation reflection
From Karim:
Well done good work when thinking about slogans and key words. Nice design and good ideas. Please show the final draft on the computer as an image so I can give you the clearest evaluation, but you seem to have good ideas. Put them into pictures and next time you may wish to show your ideas with more pictures. So far, I think you have clever ideas and a good background.I see what angle you are coming from and what your plans are, and good work, it seems like you thought out your task. I would advise (although I have already stated so) that you add pictures so that I can give you the most thorough evaluation.
My Reflection:
I think that i did a good job on thinking on what i am suppose to do for the flyer, i have added the slogan, a logo, a question to hook my reader, key information that needs to be available to the reader, the benefits of my product, other methods to persuade my reader and appealing advertisements I used. I could of added more pictures and made it look better.
Well done good work when thinking about slogans and key words. Nice design and good ideas. Please show the final draft on the computer as an image so I can give you the clearest evaluation, but you seem to have good ideas. Put them into pictures and next time you may wish to show your ideas with more pictures. So far, I think you have clever ideas and a good background.I see what angle you are coming from and what your plans are, and good work, it seems like you thought out your task. I would advise (although I have already stated so) that you add pictures so that I can give you the most thorough evaluation.
My Reflection:
I think that i did a good job on thinking on what i am suppose to do for the flyer, i have added the slogan, a logo, a question to hook my reader, key information that needs to be available to the reader, the benefits of my product, other methods to persuade my reader and appealing advertisements I used. I could of added more pictures and made it look better.
Wednesday, 18 November 2015
reflection
Reflection for advertisement:
In IT class we have been learning about advertisement for the past few weeks. And so one of our tasks was to make awareness for any product of your choice and you may also make up your own, and decided to make up my own product so named it Pelo gorgeous which means in Spanish beautiful hair, so I decided to do that. First I had to plan it on this paper and (i will be putting the picture under this reflection) we had to give our product appealing adjectives and mine were: soft, natural, long, rich, fresh, and beautiful. Questions to hook your reader: what are you waiting? What are the benefits of this product: softer hair and longer hair, my slogans are magnificent hair begins here and no more tears. What is the key information? Coast, special offers, sizes and competitions. What are methods that I can use to persuade my reader I have written this: pictures, buy 1 get 1 free, trailer and discounts. And for what I’m actually going to do for the final is this:
I am first going to write the title which is pelo gorgeous and the introduction how it works, what is the name of the product. and then I am going to have the sales that are coming up what are the prices how can you win them are you going to have discounts or any special offers we have for them. After that I am going to put the ingredients, and definitely lots of pictures that will appeal to the human eye. Finally, at the end I am going to have a conclusion on why you should buy my product and I will basically summarize it, and this shampoo is for women only of all ages. Advertisements has been a fun topic to learn about, but it need a lot of effort and thinking outside the box on what your audience might like or what might they hate.
Saturday, 14 November 2015
pelo gorgeous advertisement
I’m going to do and advertisement about the
shampoo Pelo gorgeous and I’m doing this because I think that Pelo gorgeous is
a good shampoo for your hair, but its popularity is not a lot so I’m doing it
about Pelo gorgeous raise its popularity.
I asked my mum, sister and friend on who the
advertisement should be for and they all said the women that are of all ages.
This advertisement is going to catch all
women’s eyes mostly because they are the ones that are usually concerned about
their hair and they are the ones who get hair damage.
Women are people who get really concerned about
their appearances especially when it comes to their hair. Sometimes they might
have tangles in their hair and the best way to get rid of it is by using this
shampoo, this problem annoys the little girls more.
My strengths in using DTP is the layout on it
and I know almost everything on there so it’s going to be easier for me to
control it.
The highlight of this project is going to be
the title, picture and slogan and it’s going to have be big because that’s how
they are going to read the whole thing.
To finish the whole project it might take me
about 10 days to perfect it.
Slogan:
No more tears
Logo:
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