Tuesday, 1 March 2016

reflection for our partners

i learnt from my team mates Akshansh, Ahmed and nicholai (same group) as well as karim.
Karims project was about a game that he created using his computer. The thing that i liked about Karims project was that he made it and it ended up being successful at the end. he also used a very complex cynics program to make it. The feedback that i would like to give Karim is that he could improve on presenting his tech fair project. i think he should go to the tech fair because of his effort in the project.
the thing that i learnt from Akshansh, Ahmed an Nicholai is that they worked together and used all of the group members knowledge to make their tech fair successful, they used a complex project. the feedback that i would like to give them is that it would have been better if they made up the design and wouldn't copy it off the instruction paper. i think they should go to the tech fair is because they made a moving robot.
Kiyara, Rania and Monica's project was very interesting to me because they made their own USB, they have all worked together collaboratively and communicated well when they were presenting. the feedback that i want to give them is that they could have designed it better from the back so it wont look like it is dangerous to touch. i also like that they designed it differently than all the other USB's so that the owner could recognize it. i think they should go to the tech fair is because they made a project that uses many technologies and its unique.
ashkan and arthur's work was very interesting because they made their own game. i like it because it uses a very good technique on how the game looks like they have worked together and communicated very well. the feedback that i would like to give them is that they could have added colour to their project to make it look interesting. i think they should go to the tech fair because their project is entertaining for people to play.
Riya's and ananya work was good but thy could have used programming. i like how they used the character from star wars because now people love star wars and that will attract them. i think they should go to the tech fair because they did aomething that everyone likes these days so it couod have an advantage of making it to the tech fair
Anishka has presented an electronic mop to us for the tech fair. the thing that i like about her project is that she made it because it is useful to people but offcourse there are prons and cons. the advantages of her project is that it can clean but the disadvantages is that it can make people lazy. the feedback that i would like to give her is that she could use more technology. i think it is going to be hard for her to be in the tech faor because she hasent used many technology in her work.
mohammed, khaled and mattie made a game called defenders ship. the thing that i like about the game is that they made it by themselves and it's interesting. the thing that they could improve on is that it could be less violent because it is a game for kids. they could have a chance to make ot in the trch fair because of theor game but as I mentioned before it could be leas violent.

Tuesday, 23 February 2016




I think I did a good a good job making the power
point and the photo booth with malaks help
I could have handed it in earlier to get a higher
grade.

Saturday, 13 February 2016

tech fair

Me and Malak are working together to make a transporting car so we decided to make a transport car because it takes part in our life.
  1. we take a toy car that moves by the remote 
  2. remove the top part and make sure it still works 
  3. get a small bowl on top of the car 
  4. put objects on it and move the car  

tech fair power point





Saturday, 12 December 2015

peer evaluation reflection

From Karim:
Well done good work when thinking about slogans and key words. Nice design and good ideas. Please show the final draft on the computer as an image so I can give you the clearest evaluation, but you seem to have good ideas. Put them into pictures and next time you may wish to show your ideas with more pictures. So far, I think you have clever ideas and a good background.I see what angle you are coming from and what your plans are, and good work, it seems like you thought out your task. I would advise (although I have already stated so) that you add pictures so that I can give you the most thorough evaluation.

My Reflection:
I think that i did a good job on thinking on what i am suppose to do for the flyer, i have added the slogan, a logo, a question to hook my reader, key information that needs to be available to the reader, the benefits of my product, other methods to persuade my reader and appealing advertisements I used.  I could of added more pictures and made it look better. 

My Flyer